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The Vampire Lord: Ch.4The Vampire Lord
Chapter 4

------------------Jewels POV-------------

“Standing here all by yourself, you should come and dance.” Andy said looking at me.
“Why are you been so nice all of a sudden, I thought you didn’t like me?” I said frozen still, not wanting to make any sudden movements.
“I’m only playing nice because there are people around and if me and you get into a fight people are going to stare and Will wouldn’t like that, he likes to remain as normal as possible. So shall we dance?” He said coming around facing me. He stared at me, with red crimson eyes.
“Alright, only becau
The Vampire Lord: Ch.2Thr Vampire Lord
Chapter 2

----------------Jewels POV------------

I awoke in a bright room. It was morning and the curtains were drawn. Looking around I could tell that I was somewhere inside the house now and that I wasn’t in the torture chamber that had been in before. Turing my head I noticed that a woman was in the corner and placing some clothes on the chair. She turned to see me looking at her.
“Oh, you’re awake.” She said going to the window to let the warm summer breeze through. It was early July and that meant it was also good hunting for the Vampire community. With all the drunken teenagers around they becam
The Vampire Lord: Ch.1The Vampire Lord
Chapter 1

----------Jewels POV--------

This wasn’t god, this wasn’t good at all. My whole family was dead, their throats ripped out like they were sheep on a farm. Someone had also cut the engine cables to the car so I had no choice but to run into the forest and hid. I knew that Vampires had done this; my family had hunted them for centuries. But there was one clan of Vampires that swore to have their revenge on my family. Obviously they hadn’t realised that they had got all of the D’Arcy family members, consider I was the only one left alive.
“Shit, shit, shit!” I said to myself, trying to
The Vampire Lord: Ch.3The Vampire Lord
Chapter 3

----------------Jewels POV--------------

I froze not knowing who it was who had just entered the bathroom for all I knew it could be Andy coming back to finish the job and drain me dry and leave me to be found by one of the staff members. I slowly pulled a towel from the holder and wrapped it around me and opened the curtain to see that it was Claire, placing a dress on the chair. I shut the water off and climbed out.
“Oh Madam, I dint mean to disturb you, but I though it be best to place the dress on the chair so you won’t have to go out into the room and grab it.” She said.
“Oh that’
The Vampire Lord: Ch.5The Vampire Lord
Chapter 5

--------------Jewels POV-----------

I got up early and looked at my watch. It was 5 am and the sun was jut rising from the sky. Turning on the light I saw that Claire had gotten me the clothes that I had requested. Getting up I changed into the shorts, top and shoes, and then opened the door quietly and walked down the hallway to the door. There was no one around and I didn’t want to wake up the whole house even though vampires couldn’t sleep, I still didn’t want to wake up the staff members, they worked hard enough as it is and even thought there wasn’t many of them they still needed rest.
I
I'm a Vampire's Pet 5
5. Lazer

When Dashin finally drags her to the lobby, he grabs a hold of the collar around her neck. Mato hears laughing, and turns around growling at the noise maker.

"Looks like she likes giving you a hard time." Zoe says as she takes a step forward. Dashin looks at her.

"She doesn't like anyone being around her." He says. Zoe looks down at Mato.

"Well, I'm sure she'll change her mind when she meets Lazer." She says, examining Mato.

"I'm sure." He says, sounding kind of skeptical as he smiles. He looks down at Mato. "Looks like I'm turning her over to you." Zoe smiles.

"Thanks." She says as she pulls out a harness. As soon as Mato sees
I'm a Vampire's Pet 2
2. Obedience

Mato gives the vampire an evil eye as he carries her down the hall. She sneers at him.

*Does he really think he'll be able to break me!! Ha!!* He opens another door, and carries her inside. He then drops her on the ground, and shuts the door while looking down at her.

"Now, lets see.....where did I put that?" He questions himself. Mato mentally chuckles, and watches him.

*He's weird....OH NO!!* She backs up as her eyes grow wide at what he's holding. He looks at her with a smirk.

"So, you know what it is, huh?" He asks. She backs up until she's against the wall. He walks towards her. "Nowhere to go." He taunts. She whimpers,
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3. Silver

Shigure laughs, and the two of them walk out of the room. Mato stares after them with a sad, yet relieved look on her face.

*So papa came here! That explains why I've never been able to find him.* She looks up at the ceiling, and howls. The howl is one of pain, loss and sorrow. A tear falls down her face as she closes her eyes. *I miss you, papa!* She says in a child like voice. After a good hour of howling, she hears the door open, and turns to see Dashin standing against the wall with a pissed off look on his face.

"Would you stop that constant HOWLING! How are you howling with a muzzle on anyway?" He asks, looking at the muzzl
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4. Leaving

Mato growls, and perks her ears when she hears something. She looks around in confusion.

*What IS that?* She questions as she turns away from Dashin, and follows the sound. When she finally comes to the source of the sound, she finds a baby wolf. Mato lowers her head a bit to see it better, and sniffs it. *What are you doing here, little one?* She questions. The puppy picks up her nose, and looks at Mato with scared eyes.

*Who are you?* The puppy asks in a frightened voice. Mato smiles, and chuckles softly in her mind.

*A friend.* Mato mentally sighs. She walks up to the puppy, and opens her mouth. Dashin goes to grab her, but
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6. Beauty

Mato growls at Zoe.

*Forget that!* She takes off running. Zoe yells at Lazer.

"LAZER!!" He comes running up, and looks at Mato's running form. He looks back up at Zoe.

*I'll be right back.* He says just before he runs after Mato, growling.

Mato's running as fast as she can away from the vampire and crazed werewolf.

*Get back here!* She hears someone shout in her head. She growls at the voice.

*No!!* She shouts. Suddenly, Mato gets tackled to the ground with someone growling on top of her.

*I told you to stop!* Lazer growls in her head. She looks up at him.

*And I refused!* She says back. He growls, and snaps his teeth mere
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7. Running and Migraines

*Let go before I really get pissed!* Mato growls. Lazer looks at her.

"Let her go, Lazer. We both know she's not going anywhere." Zoe commands. He lets go, and Mato walks off towards the door to a HUGE house. She scratches the bottom of the door once she gets there, and doesn't stop until Zoe opens the door. When she did, Mato runs into the house, and runs all over for about three hours.

Three hours pass. Zoe watches as Mato runs past, and puts a hand to her forehead.

"Boy, she had a lot of energy. That she can run all over the house is shocking enough, but she's been at it for hours!" Zoe says as she watches Mato
Unbreakable-30-   Varenna held onto Zaviens arm tightly, nuzzling into his bisep as they walked. She closed her eye's, and just let him lead her down the hall. She wasn't as afraid as she use to be. She remembered times when she couldn't even move because of how scared she was, and he had to carry her down the hallways.
  "Is Hanz the reason that you kept me hidden from the world?" Varenna asked gently, opening her eye's and looking up at him childishly. He looked down at her sadly, her eye's were so pretty. He nodded and looked away from her again. He opened the door to his room and gently lead her inside before shutting the door. The room smelled like L
The Academy Of Blood-Chapt 26A little later I was half dragged half carried kicking and screaming onto the “Stage” along with Terra (Diva-Queen) and Alesha (The Academy's Hyper Red
“Angel”)
“Sing Sing Sing!” was all we heard before the music started and Terra and Alesha took up their poses. I grabbed a bottle of blood as did they and used them as mics.
I began.
“Does he love me? I wanna know, How can I tell if he loves me so?”
Then Terra and Alesha came in with their duet.
“Is it in his eyes?” Posing very theatrically into their “mics” And Alesha taking a swig at the same time.
“Oh, no you'll be de
Destiny Chapter OneChapter One

“I never got a chance to say goodbye to him.” I whispered under my breath as we drove slowly away from the Kennesaw Hospital.
           My mother sat in the driver’s seat and kept her teary eyes on the road. I didn’t understand how she could drive right now. After everything that had happened in the past few days I was scared that I too would die.
           “Are you okay with my decision to have your father cremated?” my mother stuttered.
           Jamie, my little sister who sat in her car seat smiled brilliantly at me. She was only three years old, I told myself. She wouldn’t underst
Dracula: Chapter 2
Chapter 2

The girls had come down with Victor just before the sun had started to rise, which meant also that I was able to go home. As they all came down the stairs, it had looked like the girls had being given drugs or something. They looked so high off their faces, laughing and giggling to each other, which was weird if they had spent all night playing with Victor. He was the last to come down the stairs. He seemed happy, but something else was different about him. I just couldn't put my finger on it. As I typed in who he had taken and how long they has stayed in the room for, I wasn't sure whether to charge him for the service or not. Pie
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Okay watchers. Remember that short story everyone fell in love with that I wrote: [link] His Darling Pet? Well here it is in the form of a novel with the characters you know and love: Niya and Matsuo.

Niya is a submissive vampire who has no recollection of where she came from or about the majority of other things. She's highly dependent on Matsuo who found her abandoned in the woods outside of his mansion and took her in.

Matsuo is a lonely pureblood who lives in a secluded mansion away from the struggles of being a high ranking vampire. Niya is his pride and joy; he deeply loves her despite all her quirks and antics.

Here you go. His Darling Pet: The Novel

Table of Contents:
Ch. One -- The Storm -- You are here
Ch. Two -- Acceptance -- [link]
Ch. Three -- Hunger -- [link]
Ch. Four -- Signs -- [link]
Ch. Five Part a -- Beautiful Sounds --[link]
Ch. Five Part b -- Beautiful Sounds -- [link]
Ch. Six -- You are mine -- [link]
Ch. Seven -- Time to Learn -- [link]
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Mood: Love ~DarksProdigy Nov 3, 2009
I am very selective on what I read, and I saw this and I am going to chapter two now. I am already thinking of what would happen next.
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~muffinlybliss Nov 3, 2009
You'd be surprised ^_^
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~AdorableNinja Oct 22, 2009  Student General Artist
wow this is really good Niya is soooo cute ^w^ great job on the stry cnt wait 2 read more
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~muffinlybliss Oct 22, 2009
Thanks. And yes, she is really cute. :D
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This is very well written. At first, when I noticed that it was a vampire story, I feared it would turn out to be another story played off of Twilight, nevertheless, you proved me wrong. It seems that the plot is quite interesting, even though this is only the first chapter.

You have a wonderful source of diction- full of description and quite a poetic language throughout. It definitely keeps the reader interested and hooked throughout the piece. The use of an equivalent amount of dialogue and descriptive paragraphs is already mastered. Many writers have trouble balancing out their descriptions and dialogue in their pieces, but you have definitely surpassed that level. Therefore, you have taken a step higher in your writing, making it much more professional sounding.

As I had previously stated, this is turning out to be what appears to be a very interesting plot. I wish you luck with the continuation of your in-progress novel, and hope to read your newest installment.

Keep up the great work and happy writing!
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~muffinlybliss Oct 20, 2009
Thank you so much. You have no idea how much I appreciate your beautiful comments. Thank you so much.

P.S. Btw...I despise Twilight
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=star-blazer Oct 20, 2009  Professional Writer
You're very welcome^^

haha. Yes, I despise Twilight, as well. Not the storyline, frankly I think it was quite well developed (a little cliche, but all together well developed) but it suffered from very poor writing skills. Meyer's writing level, in my opinion, as well as many other authors in the field, agree that her level of writing was around elementary. In fact, I've witnessed writing from a much lower level surpass hers. It takes more than just a well developed storyline- the quality of writing matters, as well.
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