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Okay watchers. Remember that short story everyone fell in love with that I wrote: [link] His Darling Pet? Well here it is in the form of a novel with the characters you know and love: Niya and Matsuo.

Niya is a submissive vampire who has no recollection of where she came from or about the majority of other things. She's highly dependent on Matsuo who found her abandoned in the woods outside of his mansion and took her in.

Matsuo is a lonely pureblood who lives in a secluded mansion away from the struggles of being a high ranking vampire. Niya is his pride and joy; he deeply loves her despite all her quirks and antics.

Here you go. His Darling Pet: The Novel

Table of Contents:
Ch. One -- The Storm -- You are here
Ch. Two -- Acceptance -- [link]
Ch. Three -- Hunger -- [link]
Ch. Four -- Signs -- [link]
Ch. Five Part a -- Beautiful Sounds --[link]
Ch. Five Part b -- Beautiful Sounds -- [link]
Ch. Six -- You are mine -- [link]
Ch. Seven -- Time to Learn -- [link]
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I am very selective on what I read, and I saw this and I am going to chapter two now. I am already thinking of what would happen next.
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You'd be surprised ^_^
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~AdorableNinja Oct 22, 2009  Student General Artist
wow this is really good Niya is soooo cute ^w^ great job on the stry cnt wait 2 read more
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Thanks. And yes, she is really cute. :D
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=star-blazer Oct 20, 2009  Professional Writer
This is very well written. At first, when I noticed that it was a vampire story, I feared it would turn out to be another story played off of Twilight, nevertheless, you proved me wrong. It seems that the plot is quite interesting, even though this is only the first chapter.

You have a wonderful source of diction- full of description and quite a poetic language throughout. It definitely keeps the reader interested and hooked throughout the piece. The use of an equivalent amount of dialogue and descriptive paragraphs is already mastered. Many writers have trouble balancing out their descriptions and dialogue in their pieces, but you have definitely surpassed that level. Therefore, you have taken a step higher in your writing, making it much more professional sounding.

As I had previously stated, this is turning out to be what appears to be a very interesting plot. I wish you luck with the continuation of your in-progress novel, and hope to read your newest installment.

Keep up the great work and happy writing!
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Thank you so much. You have no idea how much I appreciate your beautiful comments. Thank you so much.

P.S. Btw...I despise Twilight
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=star-blazer Oct 20, 2009  Professional Writer
You're very welcome^^

haha. Yes, I despise Twilight, as well. Not the storyline, frankly I think it was quite well developed (a little cliche, but all together well developed) but it suffered from very poor writing skills. Meyer's writing level, in my opinion, as well as many other authors in the field, agree that her level of writing was around elementary. In fact, I've witnessed writing from a much lower level surpass hers. It takes more than just a well developed storyline- the quality of writing matters, as well.
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